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(@lingdar)
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Joined: 5 years ago
Posts: 16
05/01/2016 2:23 am  

Here is my song for this week.
Google drive share links
PDF music notation of the Melody with words -
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1PGsPbdfbXTWVZzcFlYY0NlQkU/view?usp=sharing

mp4 of me playing and singing assembled in garageband. I am not a great singer or player.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1PGsPbdfbXTcDFxeHh1MU1BNmM/view?usp=sharing

Below are the words
[V1 Melody ]
V1
I thought...
I think...
There's more..
More what?

V1 [repeat]
I thought...
I think...
There's more..
More what?

[V2 Melody ]
V2
How? What?
am I?
I am?
I am! I am! I am.

[V3 melody]
V3
I think.
I am.
I am...
Alive
I am alive

V3 [repeat]
I think.
I am.
I am...
Alive
I am alive
I am alive

Lead guitar is playing melody line. In places with words I am singing a couple octaves lower. There is also rhythm guitar doing 4 muted 1/16 notes on low E string then G on low E string then 4 muted 1/16 notes on low E string followed by A on the low E string. I have also using large band used a simulated beat machine to add some percussion tot he mix.

I look forward to your thoughts and critiques.

LingDar


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 pbee
(@pbee)
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Joined: 15 years ago
Posts: 2097
06/01/2016 2:56 am  

Hmm interesting. Im sure Descartes would have approved maybe his ghost does too :D .
For me this song has a Digital Birth theme, attaining life/knowledge if you will. I see it as that of a ghost becoming self-aware within the digital world of music, and therefore hits the brief, well done. In terms of a song you might want to make your fundamental point a little more explicit though, if its too obscure you’re in danger of losing your audience. Keep up the good work
Cheers
Paul

Check out my Reverbnation page here


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