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(@jamestoffee)
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05/04/2015 12:46 pm  

Y13W23 Everybody

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=====Revised Version=====

Nobody wants to be lonely
But sometimes you’re left alone
2 A.M. is the hardest
When there’s no one you can phone
Waiting for the sunrise

Chorus
Everybody needs somebody
Everybody needs someone
Everybody needs somebody
Everybody needs someone

Someone was washing the windows
Somebody brought the mail
Someone rang you up at the checkout
Somebody posted bail
Go out; get lost in the crowd

chorus

Is anybody, is anyone
Is anybody, is anyone
Lonely?

chorus

=====Original Version=====
Nobody wants to be lonely
But sometimes you’re left alone
2 A.M. is the hardest
When there’s no one you can phone
Waiting for the sunrise

Chorus
Everybody needs somebody
Everybody needs someone
Everybody needs somebody
Everybody needs someone

Someone was washing the windows
Someone brought the mail
Someone rang you up at the checkout
Someone had a big yard sale
Go out; get lost in the crowd

chorus

Is anybody, is anyone
Is anybody, is anyone
Lonely?

chorus


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 pbee
(@pbee)
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Joined: 15 years ago
Posts: 2097
06/04/2015 8:31 pm  

Hi James,
nice little song here that fullfills the brief well.
Given the fundamental message is that everybody needs somebody/someone and that everybody is somebody/someone, I think I would make the connection a little stronger in this verse

Someone was washing the windows
Somebody brought the mail
Someone rang you up at the checkout
Somebody had a big yard sale

cheers

Paul

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(@jamestoffee)
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Posts: 2852
07/04/2015 10:37 am  

Hi Paul,

Thanks for the suggestion :D

***POOF*** Changes made :mrgreen:

-James


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