-- All eyes on me now--
Verse 1
Well I guess your sorry
that you left me now
you went off
under anothers spell
How do you like
your new man now
how ya like it in
that run down Hotel
Chorus
Now I'm in the spotlight
I'm a risin star
Never knew when my time would come
But all eyes are on me now
Verse 2
I guess it was never
True love for you
you always thought
me a joke
That hard dealin man
You thought was so fine
I hear he
Drinks an he's broke
Chorus
Now I'm in the spotlight
I'm a risin star
Never knew when my time would come
But all eyes are on me now
Verse 3
What do you think of your
Down an out now
you in
Heartache Hotel
Do ya still think
your in heaven Babe
or do you think
you've gone to --- Oh well!
Chorus
Now I'm in the spotlight
I'm a risin star
Never knew when my time would come
But all eyes are on me now
Bridge
Fine cars and beaches
and long winded speeches
and all that
I want to be
Beautiful faces and
Beautiful places
are ahead
in my life for me
Chorus
Now I'm in the spotlight
I'm a risin star
Look behind you girl
never knew when my time would come
But all eyes are on me now
outro
all eyes are on me now
all eyes are on me now
D. (c), 2007
Try a little country twang on this one
Chords are:
verses
G/
G/.....C/...G/
G/
G/.....D/.../G
chorus
C/.........
D/...........G/
C/..................C/
C/.....D/.........G/
Bridge
C/...........C/...
C/...........C/...
C/......D/
D/..........G/..
Hi Sabalo
There isn't much I'd change about this at all. I think it's a really good piece and a good interpretation of the assignment. Good story told well.
Can hear the country bit even as I attempted a little play along.
Good stuff
Bob :wink:
You are what you eat, eat well
Pretty much agree with Bob on this one - I had the Country twang, as you put it, in my head as soon as I started reading. Nice piece of writing, I think you've got a good one here!
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Hi sabalo,
Yeah it was definitely a country groove in my head when reading this. Pretty good really IMO although there was 1 line that for me didn't quite work when compared to the rest of the writing
That hard dealin man
You thought was so fine
I hear he's
Drunk, down, an broke
What your saying is fine I just feel that the line is a little awkward. Maybe something like
That hard dealin man
You thought was so fine
I hear he
drinks and he's broke
Cheers
Paul
Thanks guys and Paul I do like that, making the change right now. I have to get a way to get some of these on line. My melodies take to long to transcribe and I am trying to use this as just what it is. Makes me write a song each week to a prompt. This song sounds really good with the melody. Thanks for the feedback
D
