Wow, bob - these weeks task sure was hard! This could do with some patching up but here is the first draft
[u]Picture Perfect
Lookin back on the
good ol' days
Recollecting Memories
of you and me
and what has changed
and how through time
you've stayed the same
Chorus
Return to me, please come back
Cant you see what i am tryin to say
I love you babe, i didnt speak those
words intentionally
I've got the picture in my grasp
somethin's missin'
That ear to ear smile you gave
it's not there
but the picture wouldn't be so clear
without those pretty eyes
and that lonesome stare
Chorus
Forget the past
bring on the near
let this picture
become clear
forget the past
bring on the near
let this picture become...
Chorus x2
Hi'a Mattutaylor
I really like verse 2 and 3 but the 1st verse honestly doesn't do anything for the song...( in my honest opinion ) and using the title repetitivly, would work well too, as it is great.
How about this to start.......
Lookin back at the
photograph
Recollecting Memories
of you and me
Seeing that smile stretch
ear to ear
Picture perfect memories
But you would have to copy the meter into the other verses for it to work
go well
Ja'mir ;)
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Hi Matt,
I can't tell you how many times I have come in and looked at this song and never posted. The reason being is I like it alot even though it could use a change here and there I didn't have time. I have a full house here( all boys including hubby) but if you don't mind, I would like to give a try between now and friday.
PS one of my boys is named matt so I'm keeping an eye on ya, lol
take care
inkpen :)
