Excellent feedback. Thank you. This song was supposed to talk about my wife and I both feeling rather disconnected with many of our friends lately a...

James,I've been meaning to give some feedback on this one and haven't had the chance until now. I really dig this tune. The verses are really good a...

Agreed on that last verse, I didn't like it either. Just thought the song needed a 4th verse and it was a . I was going to go back and rewrite it at...

Thanks for the feedback James. A lot of great ideas. I would agree that some of the verses are disconnected from the word "serenity". I like the id...

6 please.