Yeah, thanks, I got it. I just couldn't do it until I had enough posts.

Hm, that's actually an interesting use of recall. Didn't think of that. In fact, I rather like it a lot.

I think "Promises beyond recall" is saying that promises they once made have been forgotten - something that makes sense for a fight.If there were thr...

Just to elaborate more on what everyone else was saying, my oboe teacher told me to try to never make a mistake. May sound stupidly obvious, but it re...

Alright, thanks for the feedback. Guess I just need to get better at muting strings. I already am working on so many other things though. I'll put it ...

I love it! I think this is very good.I don't think it's wordy at all, but then again, I tend to be too wordy too, so perhaps seeing such is not my in ...

Hm, I don't see anyway to edit my original post.I like the rhyming suggestion. I do have one verse that rhymes, but that's by accident. I was thinking...

I like it! I partially disagree with what martin-6 said though. I think the "I'm alone" seems fine, though I also don't understand the last line, and ...