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Joined: Nov 6, 2007
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Re: Yr 6 week 4 - Stool Queen

The title had me worried at first...in the UK at least, 'stool' has an alternative medical meaning!David

16 years ago
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Re: Year 6 - Week 3- The 6 O'clock News

Is this in a country style? I can imagine it well. Very good! I liked the bridge,too, leading to the big final verse. Might be worth doing something w...

16 years ago
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Re: SSW Week 3 - Fraydoc

Yes, it is in the form of a limerick. I actually used a Richard Thompson tune that I especially liked as my template, from his last but one album, I t...

16 years ago
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Re: Year 6 Wk 4 - Leorard Cohen's Songs

I agree with the others; this is really good! Makes a great subject for a song. I liked the chorus. 'He sang us a song...' nice flow and alliteration....

16 years ago
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Re: Y6week3 where clouds were a blanket

Hi, Straycat,I think this works more as poetry than as a song lyric. It is very melancholy and strangely evocative but I find it difficult to see how ...

16 years ago
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Re: SSG Wk3 - Midland Town

I know what you're getting at, I think. One of those up-beat, big picture views of ordinary life. I thought it was terrific. Loved the arrangement esp...

16 years ago
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Re: Year 6 Wk 3 She's Got Style/ MP3

A very 'stylish' lyric, John, just asking to be sung. If I were to be ultra-critical, I would say that, 'to fall in love would not be so hard' sounds ...

16 years ago
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Re: SSG6 Week 2 - Prairie Tragedy

Much punchier title.David

16 years ago
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Re: SSG Year 6 Week 3 Three Brothers - MP3

A really good song, Neil.Some of the lines I liked a lot, and the running theme of direction and roads worked well. Some of the lines were of uneven l...

16 years ago
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Re: Y6week2 winterrædingboc

Agree with Ola, the title of 'A Book For Winter' would be great.Winterrædingboc looks a bit like a mis-print, even if it has a charm of its own!Cheer...

16 years ago
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Re: SSG week 2! First post in sooooo long.

This is good stuff, Kevin. Chorus is great.I will look out for the song structure, when you post it. I'm interested to see how the verses sound, as th...

16 years ago
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Re: SSG6 Wk2 - Montezuma - Valley of Shadows

This is good, Ola, it sounds especially good when sung as oppsoed to read.Liked the climbing metaphor near the end which ties nicely to the hillside m...

16 years ago
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Re: Playing with the big boys (a suggestion)

As a real 'newbie' I have to agree with Vic and David. I'm learning a load just by having a go and seeing other people's efforts. It is daunting but a...

16 years ago
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