Hi VicI know I've not been around to support you as much as you supported me during my tenure but I was more than happy to see you'd taken over the re...
Hi DRThe whole thing gets across the huge storm really well, there's plenty of good description and imagery in the first verse. The use of Thor's ham...
Hi MontezumaThat's one way to blow the Santa myth wide open.Really well written and well thought out piece with a great and funny twist at the end. G...
Hi TrevHope that condition gets sorted soon - look after yourself mate.Bob
Hi PaulI like the way you've written it to be from the point of view of the downtrodden realising how good life can be. Good twistListened to the MP3...
Hi JohnThis is typical Celt high standards at play. This is a touching story told elegantly and without mawkish sentiment. I like both suggested end...
Hi RayI like this it makes a great interpretation of the chorus and fits that quadrophenia reference well (I saw it again only a month or so ago).Some...
Hi RobThis definitely meets your stated intent and is a great job with some tricky lyrics here and there.Good stuffBob :wink:
Hi StraycatI like the idea here - a lifetime in the blink of an eye. You've managed to distill that idea and put it across quite well although it def...
Hi NeillI kind of get where you're trying to go with this and I think it's only two lines short of getting you there:but they were two travelers on th...